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Thursday, April 16, 2020

The ferocious bulls




Hi again. My name is Lucy and I am a student at marshland school.
Today, for writing we had to do a story about when our parents were little. Mine is a little bit of truth, but the rest is fictional. My Mum did actually have an encounter with bulls.
I hope you enjoy this story and I recommend  that you try doing a story about your parents.
What did your parents do that was naughty?
Feel free to comment.

1 comment:

  1. Wow Lucy! Another great piece of writing. You have understood the task really well. I like the way you have written this like a monologue in your mums head.

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