Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, April 16, 2020
The ferocious bulls
Hi again. My name is Lucy and I am a student at marshland school.
Today, for writing we had to do a story about when our parents were little. Mine is a little bit of truth, but the rest is fictional. My Mum did actually have an encounter with bulls.
I hope you enjoy this story and I recommend that you try doing a story about your parents.
What did your parents do that was naughty?
Feel free to comment.
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Wow Lucy! Another great piece of writing. You have understood the task really well. I like the way you have written this like a monologue in your mums head.
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