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Thursday, April 23, 2020
My magical Afghan biscuits
Hi there bloggers! My name is Lucy and I am a student at marshland school.
Yesterday I made Afghan biscuits. They weren't that hard to do, but all you need is the ingredients and you will be good.
If you want to make it too just follow the instructions then you'll have a good batch of biscuits.
How did yours turn out?
Feel free to comment.
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Hi Lucy. This is amazing work and nothings really wrong about it. But maybe next time you can add how you felt when making them into your description and a scale on 1 to 10 how you think they are. Other than that your work is amazing and keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteYum! You have inspired me to head off and make some Afghan biscuits of my own!
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