Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, April 21, 2020
Continue of the animals adventure - Letter to long lost family
Hi again bloggers! It is me Lucy again and pleased to be at marshland school.
Today, I did another piece of writing. But it was about the animal (Which I still won't name, because you probably need to read my other story) finally getting the address of her family and writing a letter to them.
It was a little hard, but it got easy near the end.
How would you react if you found your long lost family?
Comment down below.
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Lucy,
ReplyDeleteOnce again I loved reading this letter and I have left you some comments on the actual piece of work. You have such a wonderful way with words.
hi lucy i really like it i like all the wonderful words you used you did a great job
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