Wednesday, April 15, 2020
Pony on the run!
Hi again! My name is Lucy and I am a pupil at marshland school.
This piece of writing is about a pony who is so bored with his usual everyday life that one night he runs away and that spells trouble.
My teacher set me this assignment, which is now finished.
What would you do if you were bored with your everyday life?
Tell me what I could do better.
Feel free to comment.
My source was my teacher.
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Once again Lucy the words you choose to use blow me away! I love how descriptive this piece of writing is, it makes me feel like I am there with the horse. Well done on remembering to move down a line each time you use speech marks. Keep it up!
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