Hi bloggers! My name is Lucy and I am a student at marshland school. This is a piece of instructional writing. I did this piece of work a long time ago, so I thought I should post it before it got to old. Do you want to learn how to do origami? Say an origami swan? Well, scroll through this slide and follow the directions to make a swan. If you are a little confused by my instructions, then there is a video at the end which you can see what I do. I would like some feedback for my work.
Did I do a good job or do I need to work on my instructions skills?
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