Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, November 27, 2020
My Cool Civilisation
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Hi Lucy, Bella here. Your Sustainable Civilisation Slide that you have been working on for Inquiry is awesome. I love how you have given me insight into Lulandia and your overall description of your presentation. Our Ecosystem is such an important place not only for us, but for our wildlife. You have given me so much information about this, and it looks very enticing with the images you have used. Next time, when you are writing your brief introduction to what your post is about, you could be inclusive by adding why you have chosen to work on temperate forests and doing government laws for it. Im very interested to see your next following blog posts.
ReplyDeleteHave a great day Lucy,
Happy Blogging
Bella!
Thank you so much for commenting, Bella!
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